Thank you to all my visitors last Sunday.  I enjoy going around to the blogs of other authors and reading the wonderful excerpts, and I greatly appreciate that you have taken the time to visit mine.

Can you believe it is the penultimate Six Sentence Sunday?  I haven't really been participating for very long.  I know there are many of us who will continue the tradition unofficially.  And Skye Warren has a sign-up on her blog to gauge interest for continuing it on a less informal basis on a different site.  Still, I will miss the original SSS.

On to this week's Six.  I shall once again be employing my random scrolling method.  We're in Chapter 18, at the tournament, just before the dagger throwing competition and the impetuous youngest member of the royal family, thirteen year old Gregory, has talked his way into being allowed to throw.  He is not to participate in the competition but is allowed to exhibit his skills, however, he will have only two daggers instead of the three that competitors are allowed.  His mother the queen is holding her breath.

      
          The prince took his place and a hush fell over the crowd. He stared hard at the target, ignoring all else, and then lifted his first dagger from the nearby table. He tossed the instrument gently twice, testing its weight and feel. He grasped the dagger firmly by the blade, took a breath, and pitched it toward the target without hesitation. It found its home deep in the belly area of the dummy. The applause was great, but he had still one more dagger to throw.


Ah Gregory!  He's such a character, no pun intended.  He lucked out on this stunt.  Any other time he might have gotten a royal punishment.  Lucky he chose his sister's betrothal celebration and paid tribute to her betrothed with his request.

That's all from me for this week.  See you on the other Six Sentence Sunday blogs.

Kate

 


Comments

01/20/2013 00:48

Really enjoyed this... had a bit of a Robin Hood archery feel to it which made it relatable even though I've never been a dagger thrower myself. Thanks for sharing.

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01/20/2013 05:12

I have a feeling that last dagger is important . . . and so is Gregory.

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01/20/2013 06:48

Good for Gregory! One down, one to go! Love the line: deep in the belly. Even though it was a dummy that got hit, it still made me wince. :)

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01/20/2013 07:46

The prince has spunk. And some skill.

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01/20/2013 08:35

ah, I've got a lot of catching up to do

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01/20/2013 09:37

You had me at "dagger throwing competition".

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01/20/2013 10:25

I love that they've included him--although too young for competition. He is making the most of the exhibition!

Great six, Kate :-)

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01/20/2013 10:32

I loved Gregory's pluckiness in this scene and the description of his concentration was vivid. I agree with Lorraine, the description of where the blade hit made me wince as well. Great 6.

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01/20/2013 10:55

Well done. I've never thrown a dagger, but you made this scene come alive for me.

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01/20/2013 11:09

I got really invested in this little scene, would he succeed or fail, what's the special significance - terrific excerpt!!!

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01/20/2013 11:21

Loved this. And you finally put the tournament in context for me.

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01/20/2013 11:36

I like how you presented these details in a way that really showed how intense the moment is. Great six.

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01/20/2013 11:48

I love how the details make the tournament come alive.

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01/20/2013 11:49

Good for him. The small details before his throw bring this visual alive.

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01/20/2013 12:59

A Dagger Throwing Contest--I loved this. I was glad the blade hit a dummy. I cringed the moment if flew from his grip.

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Linda Morris
01/20/2013 13:06

Your descriptions of these tournament scenes always put me right in the action. Good six!

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Cheryl
01/20/2013 14:08

I did notice a little bit of Robin Hood in there ;) Very good six. :)

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01/20/2013 14:12

I agree. The description was well done and I could picture it easily. Nice six.

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01/20/2013 17:32

That was lovely. Such a full description. :)

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01/20/2013 20:10

Ohh! Great description and terrific cliffhanger! Nice six. :)

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01/20/2013 21:30

One more dagger to throw? I want to know where it's going!

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01/21/2013 09:28

This was exciting, and suspenseful. I love how he prepared himself, testing the weapon. Very nice. :)

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02/02/2013 21:59

ARGH! Don't stop there! (Also, nice hook. LOL.)

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