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WeWriWa June 2, 2024

6/1/2024

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This weekend I am back posting for Weekend Writing Warriors, a blog hop wherein writers post 8-10 sentences of their work.

I left off last time in Chapter 2 of The Christmas Carrolls. Sir Nicholas had brought Edmund home after he was attacked by some other boys who broke his pencils and gave him a black eye. Mary is at the market, and Henry insisted that his new friend meet his sister Beth.

Here are this week's ten...

     Beth sighed and sat, propping her elbows on the table and her chin in her hands. “We used to live in the country.”
     “You miss it?” Nicholas asked, checking on Henry’s black eye.
     “Yes, and so does mother,” Beth told him. “Town isn’t fun like everyone said. We don’t go the theaters or parties or even to supper with fine ladies.” The girl was taken by another coughing spasm. “And I am ill in town.”
     Ill in town, but well in the country. Some maladies could appear as one got older, but this was a puzzle to Nicholas, and it was one he could not solve yet. 


And a bit more for good measure...

     “Hmm. And do you miss the country as well, Henry?”
     The boy nodded. “I miss the animals, and the trees, and the meadows, and the birds. I like pigeons, but there are more birds in Kent. It’s quieter there too.”
     Nicholas could well understand their missing the way things were back at their childhood homes. Town was useful, and good for a change, but it was not where he wanted to spend all of his time either. He wondered how much the children understood the need for their living in London. “Is there anything you like about town at all?”
     “I like peppermints.” Beth perked up. “And pretty things in shop windows, and seeing the lovely gowns and things mother brings home to work on, she makes them even prettier than they were before.”
     “I like seeing all the horses that go by in the streets.” Henry said, and then grinned and added, “And hot chestnuts.”

Please join me again next weekend for more with Sir Nicholas, Henry, and Beth.

Kate


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10 Comments
Nancy Gideon link
6/2/2024 08:14:47 am

From the mouth of babes. Makes everything so defined and simple.

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Kate Warren
6/2/2024 03:29:22 pm

Thank you for stopping by, Nancy.

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Jenna Jaxon
6/2/2024 09:32:25 pm

So nice to see you back, Kate! Especially with this book. I remember it well and am very glad to pick up where you left us. Nicholas is a wonderful hero. This snippet shows very well that London life is not the perfect place for everyone. Tweeted.

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Kate Warren
6/4/2024 03:38:58 pm

Thanks, Jenna!

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Kate Hill link
6/3/2024 05:17:11 pm

I don't blame the kids. I'm more of a country person than a city person, too!

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Kate Warren
6/4/2024 03:39:40 pm

Same here, fellow-Kate. :)

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Teresa Cypher link
6/4/2024 12:45:11 pm

I remember this story! And I'm looking forward to reading more. Is it published yet? I do want to read it. :-)

Nice to "see" you again, Kate!

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Kate Warren
6/4/2024 03:40:25 pm

The first draft isn't finished yet, but I will certainly let you know when it is. Would you be interested in being a beta reader for it?

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Jeff Bray link
6/9/2024 03:52:38 pm

I remember this story. Glad to revisit it. Thanks for sharing again.

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Kate Warren
6/9/2024 09:49:49 pm

Thanks for visiting, Jeff.

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